in which I hit the big time, but you may still speak to me if you make an appointment

12:14 pm September 30th, 2005




			Sisyphus Shrugged - in which I hit the big time, but you may still speak to me if you make an appointment Lasciate ogni speranza and put your feet up.

jmhm


	in which I hit the big time, but you may still speak to me if you make an appointment

ahhhs. -- hmmm?


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	From: writingortyping	Date: September 30th, 2005 10:49 pm (UTC)		(linkie thing)

Funny thing, though Terry - I read your response, even though I couldn't read her stuff (too much of a big block of text and my eyes glaze over. Even legal opinions have better paragraph breaks than this wacko. Come to think of it, maybe she's Ann Rice).

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	From: pecunium	Date: October 1st, 2005 01:39 am (UTC)		(linkie thing)

No, Ann Rice may have no idea of when a sentence needs editing, and lets the needed self-indulgence run to effluent streams, but at least it's coherent. It may not be enjoyable, but it can be followed.

So, what did you think of it?

I can't take credit for the craft of it, I was too pissed off to stop and edit it.

TK

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